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FALLING
Contributed by
gee
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:16:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your hand touched mine
warm, tender
I knew then
Our eyes looked
into the others soul
Our hearts raced
a lovers pace
Faces flushed
tears in our eyes
we embraced
and kissed softly
Your are mine
as I am yours
Love me
hold me tight
I feel I am falling
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gee
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2004-09-09 10:16:17]
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Re: FALLING
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by assassinatorgirl on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:43:38 PM AEST
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| aw, i really like this. i felt such powerful emotion in this poem it's beautiful. great job. it was so well described I could envision it so easily. awesome! |
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Re: FALLING
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 05:52:19 PM AEST
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i love this...i too have a poem called the falling. a bit different though.
i can relate to this poem...i feel like this now!
- Bethani - |
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