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Never Forget Me
Contributed by
screwup
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:39:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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laugh in your face
as the crimson tint reaches your eyes
so hilarious now I'm going to die
I cut it in you
actions speak over words
how much you hurt me
torture you
**** you
love you
I hate you
I rock back and forth and scream
he never hears me
in his thoughts
dead but alive
I will forever haunt him
know that when you hear me scream
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Re: Never Forget Me
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:03:03 AM AEST
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| oh, there's such emotion and pain in here. watch how things go he might charge you with harasmen or some thing i'm not dis-agreeing with you, i think that he should get what he deserves, but just watch you back, ok? |
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Re: Never Forget Me
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:06:32 AM AEST
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Deanna...
I would probabl;y have put this in angry poetry... but this works too!! Great write... you deserve better than him... just try and get oit all out in your poems... Ur doing fine...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Never Forget Me
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:07:01 AM AEST
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Deanna...
I would probably have put this in angry poetry... but this works too!! Great write... you deserve better than him... just try and get oit all out in your poems... Ur doing fine...
~Donna~ |
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