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My Lonely Flower
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:14:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You stand there so proud,
Standing high above the ground,
Lovely yellow, soft skin,
I sigh happily as I breathe you in.
Your delicate frame how does it withhold,
The fierce weather can be so cold,
But you take it that is thrown your way,
You stand tall every single day.
You are so pretty my lonely flower,
Inside you possess such power,
Your strength is so amazing,
Your bright skin forever blazing.
I wish that I could be like you,
Surviving in all that you do,
Looking beautiful, fighting hard,
Yet your sweet petals go unscarred.
Alone you stand, alone in the soil,
You never want to weep & recoil,
All the time you hold your head,
Way up above your flower bed.
So my flower I will now leave,
You like it that way or so I believe,
Pretending to be tough & standing tall,
You take whats given you take it all.
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pixie
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Re: My Lonely Flower
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:21:10 PM AEST
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Oh Pixie this is beautiful and you are the strong beautiful bloom that can withstand anything I see it in you
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Re: My Lonely Flower
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:31:58 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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Re: My Lonely Flower
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:56:46 PM AEST
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For a minute, I thought you were talking about yourself, or your soul, but I was separated from that track by the fourth stanza.
This is a lovely poem, which made me gaze a gazer's stare.
Well done. |
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Re: My Lonely Flower
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 04:03:45 PM AEST
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Beautiful yet sad.
great write........ |
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Re: My Lonely Flower
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:10:22 PM AEST
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| this is so pretty.. i think it's one of my favorites of yours -- great writing * |
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Re: My Lonely Flower
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:59:38 AM AEST
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What a lovely yet sad write. Touches the readers heart but is a very enjoyable read. Very touching & beautifully writen. Sweet.
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