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Fall
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The leaves are blowing all around,
Red,yellow,brown & green,
you can hear the wind make a sound,
It's beautiful when first seen,
The air is brisk,and the clouds are gray,
Theres a chill in the breeze,
children playing in a blanket of hay,
mixed with those falling leaves,
Fall is so striking and comes once a year,
The beauty of the changing season,
God's creation brings but a tear,
The beauty of Fall is the reason!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
... [
2002-11-06 17:30:00]
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Re: Fall
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by Rose on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 10:18:45 AM AEST
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Nice write. I can see this happen as I read it. I love nature, in all aspects, even in the cold.
Lovely nature write,
AmberRose :) |
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Re: Fall
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:53:53 PM AEST
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Beautiful view this gave
I really liked this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Fall
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by penman on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 03:23:11 PM AEST
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| Very nice verse. Swells the nostalgia for fall in the mind and heart. |
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