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You Asked
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:48:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you asked me why I want to be with you still
so I am here to say some things you do for me
I want to be with you cause ever time I hear your voice my hart skips
every time you walk in a room you make me go week
you fill me with so much hope
you loved me when no one else would
every thing that you do takes me away from this world and sets me free
your touch makes my pain go away
your kisses make the world stop turning
every time I am with you it docent matter what we do
all that matters is me and you
the world could end I wouldnt cry
because I would be there with you
nothing matters to me more then you I am trying to show you
so ill start off slow and small
then I am going all the way
ill make you see why I still love you.
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Re: You Asked
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:09:57 PM AEST
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| excellent write. you explained your feelings very well. |
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Re: You Asked
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by AnastasiaN on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:48:27 AM AEST
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| this is a beautiful poem bradley, thanks and keep writing. |
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Re: You Asked
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by wild_girl121 on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 12:50:50 AM AEST
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| hey brad, whats up? i havent been online in awhile but i read this and i really enjoyed it, keep posting |
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