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Song one
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:23:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Song One
I want to be the drug that
Flows through your veins
And be what you use
When you want to drown the pain
I want to be inside you
As you are always in me
Don’t push me away
Inject me into your soul
So that I can help you
From your memories, be set free
I want to save you from that blade
You are I are held… in your hand
So that you won’t ever leave me again
You are the only one on who I can depend
I am an angel will you be my wings
Together we can tear apart everything
I don’t want to be left alone
Promise you will be with stay with me
Till we find a place to call home
Copyright ©
Doriens_Picture
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2004-09-09 18:23:15]
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Re: Song one
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:29:42 PM AEST
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=]] powerful and emotional (like you said). well if you are writing the songs for the band, than your band is sure to be fantastic, at least in the lyrics part of it. this kind of reminds me of cold by crossfade.
the only thing i dont really like about this piece, is your title "Song one" pet peeves about untitles etc, dont ask me why. keep up the excellent work as always. |
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Re: Song one
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:36:43 PM AEST
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This is really lovely......I enjoyed it immensely...
Jenni |
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Re: Song one
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:54:35 AM AEST
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wow I really liked this, very dark and full of emotion, powerful write.
pixie xx |
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