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Fighting The Fallen
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:46:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fighting the darkness
That’s on the other side
This mirror of my life
Fighting the fallen
When I feel the most alone
I find my self growing
Ever so restless
When my hearts is frozen and
My bodies turned to stone
I guess that’s how I have to be
To save those who mean
Everything to me
Covered by what light
Is left in to night
I will save the ones I love
I am fighting for what’s right
I am an angel like of those above
Protecting the world setting it free
In all of you, I find the strength
To carry our this fight
No matter what the length
This is my promise to you
So keep your promise to me
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Doriens_Picture
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2004-09-09 18:46:01]
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Re: Fighting The Fallen
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:37:51 PM AEST
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Very interesting images u project.
Awesome writing!
Very thought provoking.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Fighting The Fallen
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:50:05 AM AEST
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| Like the imagery here and the metaphors. A battle between choices, paths. Very nice. |
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Re: Fighting The Fallen
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:56:08 AM AEST
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anbother good write :) dark writes are defenatley your calling,
pixie xx |
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