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Extra care
Contributed by
SlimStaple
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:13:22 PM in AEST
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I have no natural grace,
And I know Im sure to fall on my face.
But I am aware that as long as I can
Let you think Im your biggest fan,
Then nothing about me matters at all
And whenever I want, I will have a ball.
I know that you will always be there,
So Ill be sure to use extra care.
I will try not rip up a heart shape leaf,
Or become a little thief.
But I will always take with out asking,
And Im sorry if Im not that good at Masking,
Everything that goes on in my brain,
But I wont let my thoughts go down the drain.
Just as long as I know for sure, you will always be there,
I will never forget to take extra care.
So I dont care if you look at me like Im a fool,
I wont always act cool,
But I will always be there,
So you better take extra care.
My feels get hurt by the simplest thing,
But even if it stings,
I will bounce tight back
And then I just might prick my finger on a tack.
I know that I will never make sense,
But thats only if youre dense.
Keep an open mind
And I will always be kind.
Now I have to go because Im tired
And if I keep you bust to long you might be fired
Copyright ©
SlimStaple
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2004-09-09 19:13:22]
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Re: Extra care
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:54:03 PM AEST
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Very stimalating thoughts over the hidden meanings.
Don't know much 'bout making sense but I know I've spent some years strieving to be different to everyone else.
Great writing!
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Extra care
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by SlimStaple on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:56:48 PM AEST
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Just wanted to say sorry for the few spelling mistakes I see I made. I meant to use the words busy and right, not bust and tight. Sorry.
(Okay, the hidden meaning is this; I wrote this poem on a whim, just trying to see if I could make it ryme, and then I read over it and I was like, "Wait...is this about Daffy...? (A guy I know.) And it is...but oh well. I don't love him, he just kinda came up.) |
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Re: Extra care
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 01:36:59 AM AEST
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You've rhymed this up well. Good work.
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