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Ravens Visit
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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drift away mysterious bird
into the night
large black shadow
silent raven
taking flight
solitaire soul
not another to be found
touched my life
here on this sacred ground
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deadheadpoet
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2004-09-09 23:11:13]
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Re: Ravens Visit
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:14:49 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
luv, hugs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Ravens Visit
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:28:13 AM AEST
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Nice, although I'm not sure how sacred a motel car park really is - I get the picture.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Ravens Visit
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 07:46:21 PM AEST
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good one,solitaire soul thats a cool line,
verry artistic i love how you make something ordinary sound and feel magical!* |
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Re: Ravens Visit
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 10:52:44 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Ravens Visit
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST
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Very Beautiful!!!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Ravens Visit
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:38:09 PM AEST
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I like this a lot..
I could say you had been blessed to have such beautiful birds visiting you so often as they had..
(lest the mythical story behind them..lol)
Great write-
B |
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Re: Ravens Visit
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 11:56:17 PM AEST
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I have to agree with Blackholesun when he wrote- "you make something ordinary sound and feel magical." Nice write Laura.
~Jenny~ |
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