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AFFECTION
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The pullet has found it's roost
The mighty elephant is endowed with a liar
while my love roams in the wind
looking for were to lay
My lips give in to dryness
like the plant in the harmattan
How long will my heart hang in the sky
Definitely o fall like a shooting star
He who hears my cries
Let him wipe my tears
He who bears my loneliness
let him make me a pillow
not only to lay my manhood
nor for my lips be wetted
But for ripe affection be tapped
by the desire of my heart.
Olasunkanmi rasheed igbalajobi.
Nigeria.
Copyright ©
olasunkanmi
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2002-11-06 23:00:00]
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Re: AFFECTION
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by Lia on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 12:57:54 AM AEST
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| hmmm...where does the elephant come into play here?? |
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Re: AFFECTION
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 08:28:04 AM AEST
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very interesting write about LOVE?GOOD !
Christina |
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Re: AFFECTION
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by olasunkanmi on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:49:50 AM AEST
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| I really appreciate your effor4t committing on my poem , am a new poet i do need support from such a beautiful mind like yours |
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Re: AFFECTION
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:04:41 AM AEST
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I love the way you used animals in this poem to describe your affection, this is a beautiful write my friend, Keep em' coming you know i enjoy reading your poetry..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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