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As I lay dying
Contributed by
2bruisedandbeaten4you
on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:49:07 AM in AEST
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As I lay Dying.
The screams start as the knife slips in
The screams start as the pain begins
The blade hits the skin and sinks right in
The blade bites the bone and I start to moan
The pain is intense but the eyes will not close
The pain is intense but the mind still knows
This is for the best and the best is for me
This is for the best so dont cause a scene
Just cut the flesh from the bone
Just cut the flesh, drive the point home
The blood starts to flow and drip from me
The blood starts to flow and fill me with glee
The pain is a pleasure that few will know
The pain is a pleasure so hard to control
I cut and I slice and I grit my teeth
I cut and I slice and I remove the disease
I bleed and I drip and blood stains the floor
I bleed and I drip and they cry out for more
The voices wont leave and they haunt me for days
The voices wont leave, they wont go away
So I beg and I barter for the silence of death
I beg and I barter with my dying breath
But they heed not my words and disdain all my thoughts
They heed not my actions or the deeds I have wrought
They judge the heart and the heart is not pure
They judge the heart and then show me the cure
Carve the diseased organ out they say
Carve it out and throw it away
You have no need for a heart they exclaim
You have no need for a soul, so they claim
Sell those to me for a wonderful price
Sell them to me for a wonderful life
You can be rich and have all you want
You can be rich and have lots to flaunt
But in the end you will burn just the same
In the end you will scorch in the flame
So live while you can and enjoy all you please
Because this world is a ***** disease
And we are the cure, the medicine you seek
But I have heard all these lies before
I have heard all these lies and much more
They are all false and the voices they lie
They are all false and much as they try
To lead me astray and hope not for Him
Because I know the outlook is grim
I still trust and have faith that Hes real
And to His evelasting love I appeal
To cleanse me from my filthy ways
And to never again let me stray
From his path and the life he offers to me
And so to Him I send my plea
Wash me savior for I have sinned
I have sinned again, and again, and again
I ask for forgiveness and the grace to believe
That for my faith everlasting life Ill receive
So as I lay here, bleeding to death
I ask for Your mercy with my dying breath.
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Re: As I lay dying
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by Silent_Composer on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:53:55 AM AEST
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Very emotionally exposed, graphic in a hard sorta way, dam excellent poem in all aspects.
I know little...But I do know he up there will always forgive your sins.But Im sure others that know more will shed more light on the subject :)
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Re: As I lay dying
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 03:07:05 AM AEST
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Holy cow that is deep.
If you like to talk pm me ok..
an very well written deep poem........ |
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Re: As I lay dying
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by screwup on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:55:22 AM AEST
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awesome emotional dark write... these emotions really touch me. I can really understand where you are coming from here, and I like your style a lot...
~Deanna |
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Re: As I lay dying
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by luna_mica on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:51:14 PM AEST
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| cooool... i like it. its ALOT like mine. the blade and then the voices and then the plea for forgiveness from God. heh. great minds think alike, eh? well... i guess since we have extremely similar dna that we have brains pretty much developed in the same way. ... anyways, i like it and the style is great. |
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