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Time freezes
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:33:16 AM in AEST
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Red light, yellow light, green light go
watch all those go too, and fro
Wouldnt it, be cool if one could make time like that
You could sit and talk, freeze it, then come back
make for time you missed, and time you began
To pick up the conversation, and no thought lost
To laugh and laugh, and get out the most
To be able to see things, and antalize,
And begin, what you left off with out surprise
Never lose the true meaning of the context
But as we know.........life and convos all have to flow the way life goes
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brew
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2004-09-10 10:33:16]
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Re: Time freezes
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by markie on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:21:04 PM AEST
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| Great poem. It would be cool also if we could have a delete button and take back things we say...good write!!! |
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Re: Time freezes
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:53:02 PM AEST
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so true so true.
good write. |
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Re: Time freezes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:58:35 PM AEST
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you really hit the nail on the head good write.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Time freezes
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 03:13:43 PM AEST
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Great write.....wouldn't it reallybe good.......
Jenni |
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Re: Time freezes
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by inoc on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:57:40 PM AEST
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I loved everything about this poem
the idea the style eveything...
and yes it would be handy expecially when you make a mistake or when you enjoy something in life that much that you don't want that moment to excape!
cheers! |
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Re: Time freezes
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:23:21 PM AEST
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Choices are made, red means stop, green means go, yellow means caution. Such lights we are all equipted, and as in traffic sometimes we do not heed, when green should be red and red not green....and yellow is caution and thrown to the wind.
Excellent poem as are all, thank you so very much for sharing. |
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Re: Time freezes
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by nikkkkki on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:19:24 PM AEST
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| i've thought about this so many times! thx for putting it out as it is, i wish it could be true... |
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