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Fear About You
Contributed by
screwup
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:04:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have fear...
about your wandering eyes... and where they go
your wandering hand... it scares me so
your friendly gestures... am I a fool
I am just so scared
of what you might do
would you try and take advantage of me
that's the question
my instincts warn me that I should run away
they tell me that you cannot stay
can I trust you... don't want to take a chance
the other men in my life have ruined it for you
that's what makes me so scared of what you might do
there has been others to come before you
and they nearly ruined my life
just know that before you try anything... or will you care
that my fear is of you
and what you might do
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Re: Fear About You
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by emospaztic on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:16:38 PM AEST
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I, honestly, can completely feel exactly what you're trying to say in this poem. I like the lack of punctuation, it adds to the whole stream of conciousness effect.
-emo. |
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Re: Fear About You
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:35:15 PM AEST
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Hey babe...
U DID IT!!! U finally wrote it... feel any better for getting it out? I hope so... I really do...
U did a great job with it!!! Keep writing okay...
Ur getting better...
love ya...
~Donna~ |
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