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In hopes
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:34:43 PM in AEST
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here she comes, with long blonde hair, and all her glitter
waiting for the one who makes her simmer
she steps out front, and looks all around
to see, if anyone knows , she is abound
then one she wants and needs so bad
dreams and dreams , but is so sad
what can one do, to make the dream
become, reality, and not make a scream
put jewels, and stones and beautiful flowers
in a glass jar, to the other to shower
not that, but just be herself
and in hopes, it will, beat the test
love it is, i do know now
so make what will be and have it grow
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brew
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2004-09-10 17:34:43]
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Re: In hopes
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:27:38 PM AEST
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The one precious item we have on this earth, is not gold or jews, nor is the image, it is time...time we can't buy, once spent it is gone, when we fret over time not well spent...we are merely spending more time.
Another beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: In hopes
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:01:45 PM AEST
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| i love the start to this poem i thought it set the feel for the poem excellently |
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Re: In hopes
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by englishprincej on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:43:42 AM AEST
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Not bad, like the opening but the last six lines I felt didn't add anything and were confusing.
But as always a high standard. |
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Re: In hopes
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:05:42 PM AEST
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Brew this was a really great poem indeed!
Love what it is? If you have found it then cultivate it and make it grow! Then you will really glow!
Enjoyed reading this poem, and thank you so much for sharing it!
hugs
consue |
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Re: In hopes
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:51:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful write....... especially loved the beginning.....
Jenni |
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Re: In hopes
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:32:37 AM AEST
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sweet and hopeful, im sitting here hoping they say hello! hugs n' love nessa
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