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Sightless Dreams
Contributed by
Silent_Composer
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:10:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sightless Dreams
A secret garden, hidden from me,
Paths of rose petals, I wish to see,
Lush full trees, of mythical fruit,
Fairies, nymphs and fawns with lutes,
Laughter and play, the medicine I need,
Animals sing and dance as magic is freed,
Lakes of pure sweet crystal blue,
Full of mermaids, hidden from view,
Lush beauties, mischievous eyes,
Beware or be bound by their ties,
Something I can live with,
A place of mysterious myth,
I can hear and smell the enticement,
I taste the love and feel the enjoyment,
A magical land of friends within my mind,
But the mists of sleep recede, leaving me blind,
Once again darkness intercedes,
Milky eyes, filled with shadows seeds,
Reality is my bane, only dreaming I am free,
Another tab, endless sleep! Awaken eyes and see.
By Silent_Composer
Ps: For me to lose my sight would be very hard and emotionally scarring, for I take my sight for granted.Oh in time I would no-doubt overcome and endure, Its a harsh reminder of knowing at anytime darkness could become permanent.
Take Care everyone.
Copyright ©
Silent_Composer
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Re: Sightless Dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:22:54 PM AEST
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Awesome write... I think most of us do take these things for granted...... Thanks for the reminder.....
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Re: Sightless Dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:41:11 PM AEST
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| powerful and with a tinge of emotion to make this an amazing write. you have nice flow and rhyme that makes an excellent style to present. your title was also intriguing to me. i usually dont even both to read poems in this category, but your title interested me enough to read this. and im glad my interest wasnt put to good waste. keep up the excellent work =] |
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Re: Sightless Dreams
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by arden on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:57:11 PM AEST
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this was cool.
its awesome how it sucks the reader in. i love your imagery and the magical scene. this was truly a beautiful poem. i wish there were such a place.
really great poem. well done.
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Re: Sightless Dreams
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:29:02 PM AEST
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I always thought that losing the use of my hands would be it... but since reading this.. I think the sight is more important... I could deal with the lose of the ands or the legs or even the hearing but my sight... no I don' think so...
Awesome write... very well thought out... and written... great imagery too!
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Re: Sightless Dreams
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:35:55 AM AEST
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Very well written, and magical although sad as well. awesome poem.
For me sight is a part of me...to lose that would put me in a world of darkness where nightmares live...
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Re: Sightless Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:55:25 PM AEST
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brillaint, hugs n' love nessa
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