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The Past...
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:45:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The past...
For some... it is forever locked in regret...
For others... it is where they live...
Living there can be dangerous
Dwelling on what once was...
And is no more
I say...
The past is the past
Leave it that way
I know... it is something that's easy to say...
But hard to do
What if the past... could be changed?
Or even re arranged?
NEVER!
The past... is something forever lost
Something... that's shattered in the sea of time
Lost... forever in the ebb and flow of life
The past...
Is something... we all must live with day after day
Something... we use to measure... just how far we've come
Something ... we use to see... just where we've been
So... we'll know where we're going
It's a place... we can visit...
But we can never live there again
We must live and deal in the present
With all that comes our way
While not getting lost in the fray
The fight that we all must win...
In order to survive... again and again
I know... it's hard to deal with sometimes...
We suffer and bear... more than our share... of the pain felt in life
We... then... must look to the future...
With a little hope in our hearts and minds
And let not our eyes weep for the past...
We must crave the future... that has come at last
Cast aside the old and embrace the new chapter in our lives
For the future is NOW...
Things have got to be better...
'Cause the best in life is yet to come
Let not the past be forgotten...
By no means...
Let it live on in our memories...
Let us each one... remember... in our own special way...
The good... the bad... the ugly... of our own personal history...
The past...
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Re: The Past...
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:53:18 PM AEST
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This is awesome!!! I have to agree with you 100%.
Loved this...
Jenni |
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Re: The Past...
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:56:49 PM AEST
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Girl, u got it going on here.
Great job!
luv, huggs, smiles,
yo momma,
emy |
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Re: The Past...
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by Silent_Composer on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:26:44 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, an excellent subject, as many dwell for to long on their past, some even let it eat them up inside with devestating results, I agree with you the past is the past, it cant be changed, it cant be messed with, it should just be left as a memory.
Awsome poem
~silence~ |
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Re: The Past...
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:27:14 PM AEST
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| ::applauds:: amazing write. usually the ellipses have me going crazy eyed, but these didnt, thankfully. excellent flow and and rhymes that were well presented. powerful and emotional. fantastic concept to write about. your description was highly interesting on this piece. believe that or not. =] |
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Re: The Past...
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by JT on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:30:29 PM AEST
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Great write. It good to learn the lessons of the past, but living in it is like living in a lie.
keep em coming
-jt- |
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Re: The Past...
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:53:42 AM AEST
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| Awesome subject, past something I shouldve forgotten along time ago, Cudos to the write. |
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Re: The Past...
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:51:58 PM AEST
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| This is a great write. The past is really hard to let go..Especially if it is bad and it's your fault. |
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Re: The Past...
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by jennguy41 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2011 @ 12:27:53 AM AEST
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| alot of people live in the past and it only hurts them and the ones they love you are right let the past stay in the past |
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