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Time to find myself
Contributed by
jt
on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Derived from an era of forgotten thoughts
When life was easy, troubles unforseen
The care free self struggling to get out
but with eyes covered from realities gleam
Have I become one of the white faced walkers
This pressure of life moulds a familiar form
As we step into line behind all the rest
And we join the ranks of the tattered and torn
Working for the man on a minimum wage
Feeding the rich and starving the poor
Struggling to find what I want out of life
Striving to find what I’m struggling for
I’ll hold onto the part of me from within
That makes me smile, that makes me me
And though my shell may get battered and bruised
I cannot be what they want me to be
Copyright ©
jt
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2004-09-10 22:25:50]
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Re: Time to find myself
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:30:44 PM AEST
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Be not what they say, say not what they be, but be true to the only one that maters, to be to yourself and in that be free.
Great poem, very enjoyable, and very good advice, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Time to find myself
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:36:46 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
We all have to find ourselves from time to time.
A masterpeice of knowledge.
luv, huggs, hope,
3my |
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Re: Time to find myself
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:58:02 PM AEST
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Yes... from time to time we must all step back from life and from ourselves within...
Great write... keep up the good work...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Time to find myself
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:24:10 PM AEST
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| very nice concept. |
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