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broken bones
Contributed by
reilt
on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 07:37:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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All these broken bones
Clatter
Skin falls away
Left a shade of me
By the way side
Just in case
Fragments scattered
Gather dust and age
Into an old tale
That re-tells itself
In a same tune
That resonates through
My heart and soul
I'm former pieces of the latter
Biding time
Waiting in the dark
Searching home
Seeking you
Amongst the ruins
Of all these broken bones.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-09-11 07:37:15]
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Re: broken bones
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 11:37:00 AM AEST
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this maes no sense to me. how did the bones get broken?
why?
when?
you could have writte so much more in here to make it better.
sure, it must make so much sense to you but i just found it quite confusing. |
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Re: broken bones
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 05:44:27 PM AEST
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good thought provoking work.
wildejohnny. |
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