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A deadly drop from deathdrop.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:57:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Look at the drop!
That 6 story hie drop!
I could jump that!
I could die! And thats fact.
Look at this blood!
Its my very own blood!
But I dont wanna cut,
Id rather jump
Well, here I go,
Falling through the sky.
Suffocating quick,
Before I even die
Theres my body,
On the concrete ground.
Theres all my blood,
Splattered around.
Theres some one crying,
Some one else checking my pulse.
Then shaking their head.
Then some one shouting out that its false!
There I lay,
Shattered on the concrete.
Emergency flashing lights,
Then the trolley, and then the white sheet.
There I was.
Until my body was removed.
But for some reason.
My presence stayed there like glue.
That was all it took,
For others to forget.
They walked away, moved on.
From where my dead body was met.
But I never moved,
From that little spot.
My freedom is gone,
Happy, I am not!
Coz theres no place in hell,
For a little girl like me.
But theres no place in heaven,
Coz no one wants to love me!
So here I remain,
And as nothing more,
Than a little girl trapped in loneliness,
With her arms still scarred and torn
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2004-09-11 13:57:08]
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Re: A deadly drop from deathdrop.
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:05:35 PM AEST
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| I have never ever ever talked this way to someone. please forgive me... but please stop it... please don't go through that door. Do not committ suicide like many has done before. They think it is an easy way out, They think all will be fine. But what they done was cross the line. Your family loves you. I do in fact. God does I know.. Dont forget about that. Don't take your life away. only one can do. Please please this is not a thing to do. I care I am here. I can listen if you talk. I can do something...just stop. don't hurt yourself. GOD can be in control. He loves you. just wants you to know. He can hold your hand and guide you to a better happier place. You just made some bad mistakes. they are only temp.. death is for real. turn around and think some more...... please.. smile. talk to me.. dont give in... please.. |
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Re: A deadly drop from deathdrop.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:15:38 PM AEST
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There is a place in heaven for a lonely girl like you..and it was HIM that kept you from dying, so you can tell of your pain to others and strongly,boldly tell others why THEY shouldn't do it either! My heart goes out to you, and though having online love reach through the screen is not enough, please know we all love you and respect your pain!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: A deadly drop from deathdrop.
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:36:52 PM AEST
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from all that i've read from you i think you are a wonderful caring person with great skill in writing poetry-
i always view life as a series of chapters and maybe you should keep the faith (Bon Jovi style!?) and keep believing the page will change to a brighter one... |
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Re: A deadly drop from deathdrop.
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 12:46:39 PM AEST
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| I know you posted this poem a month ago, but I just read it now, and it's really good, I really like it. |
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