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This Opened Door
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:02:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The simplicity of it all, the weakness that I find, Watching it slowly fall, leaving me completely blind, Unknown to your eyes, foreign to your capacity, In the darkness lurks spies, searching for animosity, Understood by very few, mislead by a great deal, If you only knew, if it's fake or real, The answers always hidden, not to be revealed, But sometimes the secrets given, the lock now un-sealed, And if you open that door, there is no going back, A life where there's no more, impossibly on the right track, Blackness shall surround you, nothing will you hear, Something horrifying but true, not able to shed a tear, Finding out life was worthless, no more inhaled breath, Could have been more careless, this opened door is death.
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Re: This Opened Door
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 10th November 2014 @ 01:58:41 AM AEST (User
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Great ending line, very well written.
Understood by very few, mislead by a great deal,
If you only knew, if it's fake or real,
I really liked these two lines also |
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