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My Suicide
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 07:21:24 PM in AEST
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Im sorry all the pain this will cause
Please dont be sad, dont be mad
Ill be ok, dont miss me anyday
You dont understand all this pain
All this shame, all this blame
I have nothing to gain
Im sorry i couldnt be what you wanted
You dont know what, what i went through does
And i know all the things you wish i was
Feeling constantly depressed, feeling all this stress
I was alone, feeling disowned, hated, rejected
Caue I wil never be perfected
I will always be a freak
Everyone has to die someday
Why live in pain, with nothing to say
Cause i hate myself in every way
To my friends, who were everything to me
Dont do anything like i just did
You all deserve to live
Amazing people you are
I love all my friends
And ill miss them so
Just promise because of me you wont go
Your stronger than me
And can face your pain
Unlike me, I let it build up
I love my parents
I love my friends
just dont care for me, or my pain wont end
Im sorry, and i love you all
You just dont know
I will watch over you all
Maybe if you listen you can hear me call
Take care of each other
tell each other you care
Andif you ever need me,
I will always be there.
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willow_tara72002
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2004-09-11 19:21:24]
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Re: My Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:50:29 PM AEST
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| excellent write with power and emotion. your concept kind of reminded me of my poem, couldnt save you, because it talked about how people make the choice to die etc. |
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Re: My Suicide
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:30:59 PM AEST
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Very sad but has a beautifull ending.
I'm happy to know someone saved u as u r a master writer in these words.
You've really pulled the agony from your soul in this write!
Ask your Dr. 2 put u on med to help u cope.
U sound like such a beartifull person and the world would loose a great poet.
god bless u-n-yours.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: My Suicide
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:15:22 AM AEST
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| powerful |
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