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dream baby dream
Contributed by
oneteartofellpain
on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:23:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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"dream baby dream" everyone told me...
"cry baby cry" people told me...
no one told me "ill hold u dont cry"
no one gave me a place to run to...
no one gave me a pair of warm arms to run to n hide
no one gave me the chance to be me...
now i turn out this way and they blame no one but me
its a damn shame,yes
i know...i wish i would tame this lame
game ive lost so much...even my purity and my sanity
carved my self was my onli escape...
crying myself to sleep was my only way to be sane
socking the wall bursting my knuccles till they bled was my thrill
"dream baby dream" they gave me illusions...
illusions so ******* fake that make me take this blade and transfer myself to another place
"cry baby cry" they told me because they were too stubourne to listen to me...
now im this way and who do they blame?
me...
i blame them for telling me to cry and telling my to dream a fake future...a future where i wouldnt hurt...
a future where everyone would greet everyone gaily...
a ******* place that name existed
i tried getting away went to a place i like to call my extazy
everythin was safe nothing to lose nor gain
just some pain to lose and some happiness to gain
i felt so right till that day i found out that to dream wasnt enough and to cry was for ******* losers who didnt have anything
now that i turn out this way...who do they blame?
me....well, today i turn and say ***** YOU
you made me this way u ***** me and amde me the helpless ***** i am today
u filled me with this adrinaline that torments my nights
u tucked me into my grave
u made me all these fake promises that in the end were all bull*****
u turned me into this suicidal, violent and confused ***** that i am today
and for this i tell you THIS MUCH "DREAM BABY DREAM"....
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oneteartofellpain
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2004-09-11 21:23:14]
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Re: dream baby dream
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:46:29 PM AEST
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it's so sad to read this powerfull write!
I'm so sorry u didn't have luv in your life. It does my heart good to see u speaking out in your pain-n-agony.
I never understand untill someone tells me.
I've spent many agonizing hours on this site for years yearning to know what causes the cutting thing. U have opened my eyes, thank u so much.
I reckon u only need luv the simplest thing to give. No wonder u r filled with anger, U have the right to be ******!
I raised my children alone on welfarte but we made scrifices so I could be there for them day-n-nite 'cause I knew their father neva would be there.
I was raised on luv and therfore raised my three children the same way.
Here u r living with out the one thing u needed, well I have an open heart for u.
If ya need someone to be there emystar@msn.com anytime. I don't chat much 'cause I stay busy but I will stop it all jus 4 u to show u there are many lonly people out here that nedd your writing and someone to luv.
U melted my heart with this write!
luv, huggs, faith, hope, charity, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: dream baby dream
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 11:54:24 PM AEST
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| this is amazing......they'll never get it though.....we want them to.....and in some cases they even try to get it......but they never do......i hear ya!!!!! |
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