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I Admit it's my fault
Contributed by
gina
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Thunder striked with the lightning of your eyes
Broke the cage and freed my heart that flies
Lifted to a world so high and intense
Shivers I felt right from the first glance
My heart was pounding out of my chest
As I lived those moments that only you blessed
Suddenly things changed I don't know why
The love we shared got lost in the sky
I though you're different,so special and true
While you played games,you had to blew
I explained,made it clear but you couldn't see
That I cherished the love that bounded you and me
I tried to keep it, you didn't ,now it's gone
This beautiful thing that used to make us one
I can't believe you sit there and watch it end
While I die,feeling lost,Love im bent
Acid tears burning my soul and face
Leaving scars as souvenir and trace
The passion,the flames ,it vanished ,it flew
I admit it's my fault that I fell in love with you
Copyright ©
gina
... [
2002-11-07 14:00:00]
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Re: I Admit it's my fault
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:17:09 PM AEST
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| Love sucks! Its not anyone fault. |
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Re: I Admit it's my fault
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:17:45 PM AEST
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| Love sucks! Its not anyone fault. |
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Re: I Admit it's my fault
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:32:36 PM AEST
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This is so sad and beautiful
Keep em' coming i enjoyed this
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: I Admit it's my fault
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by Opium on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 09:45:58 PM AEST
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| ...oh whatever the pain, forgive but never forget. |
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Re: I Admit it's my fault
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 04:54:14 PM AEST
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as jibran khalil jibran said in his "the prophet": when love beckons to you,follow him,thought his ways are hard and steep.And when his wings enfold you yield to him,Though the sword hidden among his pinions may wound you.
keep going GINA,
Dandoun :) |
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