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A Hand In Hand Dream
Contributed by
Bruce
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:43:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking Hand In Hand, along the Paris streets
Up the Champ d'Elysee, to where the Arc d' Triumph meets
How wonderful it is, just walking and holding your hand
As we search for a bistro, with a dancing band
I could hear the music playing, as we were getting near
A feeling of excitement, from the music we could hear
To hold you in my arms, and dance with you sweetheart
Is something I dream about, each day we are apart
The time can't pass by quick enough, for fulfillment of this dream
The two faces that I see, with such a brilliant gleam
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-12 00:43:46]
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:47:11 AM AEST
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| *sigh*.... |
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:02:25 AM AEST
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I must admit paris has a certain romance to it, must be something in that parisian air!
This is a beautiful write Bruce.
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:13:43 AM AEST
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just dreamy Bruce thanks for the walk through Paris ahhhhhh
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by veramouse on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:37:01 AM AEST
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Been there
Done that
god willing...
will do it again
great write xx
Vera |
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by Kevin on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:30:03 AM AEST
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| That was good, makes me want to go to Paris now. ;-) |
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by MomentInTime on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:56:23 AM AEST
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Bruce - you are such a romantic
Jordan
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by thumper on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:40:17 AM AEST
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| Very sweet. sigh Wish I could be there, in that feeling of togetherness. But I'm an old married woman with the joys of new love waaaay behind me. LOL Great imagery. Write on, Bruce, write on. |
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Re: A Hand In Hand Dream
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:49:54 PM AEST
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Ah takes me back to paris and beautiful memories
Great poem
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