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coming across fairies in the wood
Contributed by
rain
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:12:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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a leaf falls silently on rearly tredened earth
the fluttering of wings, not even muffled here
time seems to stop when passing through
its as if a time worp has been stumbled apon
glance quickly and see theres more to this place
falling leaves have passengers wearing wings of lace
its a funny little game, riding leaves, i mean
if only leaves were larger or maybe i were smaller
i would play along and maybe even win
place your feet in that circle of mushrooms
the one slightly to your left
and just maybe they will take you
to their land of mirth
but then again im not quite sure they will
welcome such a tresspasser on their fun and games
but if you take the risk remember all the rules
take whatever they may give you
or be considered rude
unless it be of food for if you drink their wine
or even taste their cakes you will not place
your feet again on your home turf.
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rain
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2004-09-12 01:12:07]
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Re: coming across fairies in the wood
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:58:47 AM AEST
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That's a fantastic image you've put into my head (riding leaves) and standing in the circle of mushrooms.
This is a really enjoyable read, very well done.
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Re: coming across fairies in the wood
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by Hurretje on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:22:12 AM AEST
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Sweet fantasy..but maybe it's more than that! Great write and read.
Hugs,
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Re: coming across fairies in the wood
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:34:53 PM AEST
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| sounds like a poem someone wrote when they were stoned |
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Re: coming across fairies in the wood
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:24:57 PM AEST
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ok now most of my anger is out i can think straight and aslo appologize for my comment above,this was a real good poem,full of weird but cool fantasies and dreams
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