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Next Day Forevers
Contributed by
emospaztic
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:16:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Shaking his head
at the unexpectedness of it all
he returned home
with the promise of "I'll see you tomorrow."
Laughing quietly
so the non-believers wouldn't hear
he lay down to rest.
Eyes resting
from a day of seeing
tomorrow crept up
ambushing his dreams.
Upon waking he realized
tomorrow had seared the promise
and no words would be exchanged
between him and his latest love.
Angry miles drove them apart,
faster, faster, I'm fastest
and soon the non-believers forgot.
Copyright ©
emospaztic
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2004-09-12 11:16:53]
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Re: Next Day Forevers
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:21:37 AM AEST
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awww such a sad and emotional write
pixie xx |
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Re: Next Day Forevers
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by Orlando on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:27:07 AM AEST
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| Ah... so true! Great write! "Latest love" gives hope to the subject though. |
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Re: Next Day Forevers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:27:30 AM AEST
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Good write packed with emotion.
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