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The One Who Observes...
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:22:47 PM in AEST
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Spoken words
Learned by no other
One of no life
That sits and notices the stone out of place
The crippled child that needs some help
The one who will lend their hand to help them
The one who sees
Who feels
That wants to learn from their mistakes
To better themselves and their lives
The one who observes what others do
That owns a heart that can only hold so much
Until it hits its point where it cant take the pain that is shown
Where they break
And need time to heal
Thinking back on what had happened
Learning from each mistake
To once again gain what others do not
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:30:49 PM AEST
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Great poem........once upon a time long long ago and far far away........I tried to me and then went away....
Thanks for sharing this. |
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by sober_punk_2 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:35:25 PM AEST
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| good poem i like ver much |
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by Jolly on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:45:26 PM AEST
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| It's more than obsrvation, it's doing what a sponge does. So many observe without absorbing...Loved the poem. Great. A 9, but I can only give a 5...pthhhthrh. |
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by Sweetheart on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:04:49 PM AEST
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| Brialliant write. I enjoyed your use of words and the emotioins in this poem. It is all very true. Good job. |
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:09:23 PM AEST
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| thanks for sharing this piece i think this is an excellent write... |
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:53:41 AM AEST
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| I like this poem, I enjoyed the words in it, I really enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:20:02 PM AEST
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wow great write keep up the great work!!!
later
cheech |
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Re: The One Who Observes...
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by Buggsy on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:13:27 AM AEST
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Awesome poem! I thought that it was great. I wish that everyone could learn from their mistakes; some people are either too proud or too stupid to realise, or more to the point admit that they were wrong and therefore they can never learn and never grow. Great work.
Sean |
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