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traces of you
Contributed by
lanna047
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:33:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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why is it that when I talk to you
I don't believe what you say is true
you seem to say whatever you can
to make yourself an innocent man
it only took a second's range
for this passing feeling to change
from believing I could get by
to feeling like I want to cry
it seems my best days have come to
those days when I don't think about you
when I can to focus on other things
I can forget just how much it stings
the way that you betrayed my trust
only fills my heart with disgust
my life has come to a screeching halt
and you don't realize that it's your fault
while you've made your attempts to flee
traces of you won't release me free
Copyright ©
lanna047
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2004-09-12 15:33:36]
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Re: traces of you
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by Jolly on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:42:56 PM AEST
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| nice... |
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Re: traces of you
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:35:45 PM AEST
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| this is better than nice this is a lovely heartfelt poem - well done... |
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Re: traces of you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 04:26:21 PM AEST
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Well Written. The story changes so good. In the first time it makes you think it is about a "Half-time" love, a passing love, But then it changes to make realize the reader what's the idea behind it. The Breaking Heart love, after some troubles, and ending realizing there was something going wrong.
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