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The Tide Rushes In
Contributed by
Justalady
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:48:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Tide Rushes In
Darling, I am like a distant beach, you the mighty sea,
that wave that washes over me, searching to be free.
Like the tide you flow into me...then gently you recede,
coming back again more forceful, to satisfy my need.
I am like the sand, shifting with each wave,
giving a bit of myself, nothing I wish to save.
When your wave can no longer flow away
it settles into my being, and together we now lay,
feeling the pleasure of being as only one,
warm and wet...loving what we've become.
Author: June E. Miller (Justalady)
12/8/2002
Copyright ©
Justalady
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2004-09-12 18:48:30]
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Re: The Tide Rushes In
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by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:03:04 PM AEST
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Yes...the feeling of floating far and above this earth.......two souls joined as but one.
Beautiful poem of an elegant event.
Thanks for sharing this. |
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Re: The Tide Rushes In
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:04:46 PM AEST
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| Wow, Such a passionate poem, I will go a read more of your writing (feelings) Just what I love to read and write................Mike |
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Re: The Tide Rushes In
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:36:44 PM AEST
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Almost makes me wish I had it all over again.
A most pleasing window, thank you for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: The Tide Rushes In
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:21:17 PM AEST
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| Lovely write |
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Re: The Tide Rushes In
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by critterhideaway on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 12:53:24 PM AEST
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| Beautiful picture, can almost feel the tide. Thank you for this one |
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