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From the Void
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:23:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As the days cover the nights
And the cloughs swallow the heights
Then my world turns as I please
In the darkness I'm at ease
How I yearn to need no breath
Give them all the kiss of death
No more dawns to scrape my soul
I hide deeper in my hole
Dig on deeper where dark lies
Hear yet louder these stretched cries
There's no fire in Mount Doom
Dig on deeper for my tomb
Silent creams as I'm reborn
Tearing shrieks as I am torn
Swept away, I leave behind
The fading pieces of my mind
Tell me why is it so cold?
And so dark, so black I feel
This numb emptiness none can heal
From the barren soul I sold
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-09-13 02:23:24]
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Re: From the Void
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:26:14 AM AEST
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Awesome writing!
luv, hugs,
emy |
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Re: From the Void
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by bernard on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 03:37:45 AM AEST
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| Congratulations Hur this is a wonderful piece of perhaps who knows death and reincarnation. Somewhat frightening but I think that was your point to be made. 5/5 all the best from bernard. |
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Re: From the Void
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:02:56 AM AEST
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Wow that is deep and powerful write.
It is so great that you can write it down like that.Great job.. |
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Re: From the Void
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by arden on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:21:23 AM AEST
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this was awesome.
it was easy reading and sorta dark. really deep and cool.
great write. i very much enjoyed it.
5 stars
Arden |
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Re: From the Void
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:21:47 AM AEST
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a very well written piece in the triology.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: From the Void
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:36:03 AM AEST
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| awesome..its a wonderful work. venkat |
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Re: From the Void
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by Silent_Composer on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:24:44 AM AEST
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And again you have caught my imagination with your talent, the words of this poem have a lingering affect, making me wonder what next is instore.
Beautifully written as what I have so far is.
~Silence~ |
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Re: From the Void
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:27:13 AM AEST
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There's a lot of grief to this. A very fine portrayal of feelings that must hurt, indeed.
God bless.
Andrew |
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