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Dangerous Daydream
Contributed by
inoc
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:20:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I look out the window
and what do I see
a beautiful hillside covered in rosemary
showing me contrasting colours
the sun is in the distance
the reflection is beautiful in this blissful instance
the fence in the horiziion
crawls up like a snake
the dots of white all around are sheep like snow flake
the ever dusty road
has a vehicle movin' past
veering around the bend ever so fast
two figures walking closer
I slowly focus on thee
it's the boss and another, I must move else I'm history
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-13 08:20:59]
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Re: Dangerous Daydream
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:23:35 AM AEST
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great write
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Re: Dangerous Daydream
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:43:43 AM AEST
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The fact that I'm reading this... at my desk... in my office... at work... is clearly an indication that I am no better off. lol!
Ah... but... how can one not dream?
Delightful -
SNM |
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Re: Dangerous Daydream
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by Kie on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:53:31 AM AEST
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I am a daydreamer as well. This was so beautiful and calming to read.
Breathtaking.
Kie |
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Re: Dangerous Daydream
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:58:17 AM AEST
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it's great to dream. Good write.
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Re: Dangerous Daydream
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by Bruce on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:44:19 AM AEST
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| great write |
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