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Perfectionless Rejection
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
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Pondering thoughts of satisfaction and glory
As you slowly slip in and out of consciousness
Surviving the nightmares, points you in the right direction
Slaving away to your tired eyes results in nothing
Drift away, while closing your eyes; I'm nothing to you
Success could have been your's, but you rejected me
Like a leaf on a lonesome branch, I'll wait
You'll plant yourself next to me, I know
I thought I knew but it turns out I'm ignorant
Ignorant like a spoiled kid who doesn't know how to read
I am him and I will always be
Go away; leave me here alone, to survive my own self pity
I feel sorry for me, but I don't know why
The only thing wrong with me is you
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
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2002-11-07 21:30:00]
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Re: Perfectionless Rejection
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:27:44 PM AEST
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This is so deep and sensative
very creative with such heart in it
I really enjoyed reading this one
Great write Christopher
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Perfectionless Rejection
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by pepa on
Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 01:53:19 AM AEST
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Something has reached in and squeezed my heart whilst reading this poem. So emotive...
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