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Affliction
Contributed by
Elysianfields
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Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 12:39:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It's not my choice to love or hate,
nor my feelings, yours to decimate.
Though to my heart, I do repeal,
instead my words, too soon, reveal.
All attempts have yet appealed
to a place in your heart, but instead concealed.
Your affections trivial, not one sincere.
I often wonder if you recite in mirror
the things you'll say, to me, my dear,
with your pitchfork tongue pressed to my ear.
But there comes a time, inevitably,
when my footprints trail as I leave.
Far and long it will be, I'll be gone, finally free.
I'll move on, maybe then you'll see.
You'll lack the pace for there's no speed,
to catch up, there's no reprieve.
All hearts patch once they've grieved,
spirits mend, though once deceived.
I loved you then, not so this eve.
Never again is my soul to bleed.
Copyright ©
Elysianfields
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2004-09-13 12:39:44]
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Re: Affliction
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 01:04:41 PM AEST
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wow! that flowed really well, another good write.
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Re: Affliction
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:20:52 PM AEST
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Very well wrote..I like this one.
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Re: Affliction
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:46:55 PM AEST
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this is great bro!
please comment on my work too
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Re: Affliction
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by Elysianfields on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:56:09 PM AEST
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| Hehe, BRO? Well I suppose the poem is Asexual.. So no offense taken lol. But last time I checked, I didn't quite have the parts that constitue being a man! ;) |
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Re: Affliction
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:50:12 PM AEST
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Strong words and great flow to this..
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