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erase me
Contributed by
Adreana
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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sweet love
breathe upon
my saddened soul
which weeps
tears thick with
my own blood
or are those
my wrists bleeding?
my eyes are
on fire
and I can't
see through
the dancing flames
my skin is
crawling
with evil pans
to erase me
from your life
to take my love
out of your heart
Copyright ©
Adreana
... [
2002-11-07 22:30:00]
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Re: erase me
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:42:34 PM AEST
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| Being alone is hard for some people,I really enjoyed this write!Christina |
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Re: erase me
(User Rating: 1 )
by stephierose on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:40:40 PM AEST
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I have felt this way and reading your poem made me feel less alone, it helped me. Thank you ... Great Poem, Sad, but great
Stephanie |
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