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rising only to fall
Contributed by
Adreana
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm just a girl trying to get by in this tricky world
Trying not to get hung up by my toes
For mistakes I have made
I am told that I have grown so much this year
I am told my eyes shine a little more
Why do I feel so dull inside?
Success and I are playing "catch me if you can"
Success seems to be faster than I
I was never good at running
I feel motivation and courage every once in a while
For moments at a time I feel strong
Never lasts long
I'm not saying I have given up on myself
I just am losing faith in what I can do
What little faith I have
Like an ocean wave I inevitably fall everytime I rise
I'd like to stay risen for once
Feel stable and free
Copyright ©
Adreana
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2002-11-07 23:00:00]
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Re: rising only to fall
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:39:40 PM AEST
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| Don't loose faith in your self,Theres always hope! Good luck! Christina |
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Re: rising only to fall
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:57:03 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem - the simplicity is really effective and the image of the wave is very emotive. great read. by the way, there's always hope - hang on in there. |
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Re: rising only to fall
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 02:50:46 AM AEST
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" I'm not saying I have given up on myself
I just am losing faith in what I can do
What little faith I have" . . .
This line, not to mention this poem is imence in it's emotional impact and
wisdom. I think i needed this today, now it is i thanking you. Your a very straight foward and powerful writter, awesome in every sence of the word, keeo it up one day you may escape from the drabness of your work day.
Ben |
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