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Tomb
Contributed by
Suz
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:31:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A hill entirely forsaken
by all the flora and fauna
and even cut by no wind.
I say
How perfect for
a tomb;
yours.
Copyright ©
Suz
... [
2004-09-13 18:31:30]
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Re: Tomb
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by Justalady on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:21:01 PM AEST
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| Dark, short and a lot said with few words. One can only wonder what more had to be said. June |
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Re: Tomb
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by ladydp2000 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 03:30:47 PM AEST
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| Wow! very nice and dark and right to the point this one it is...Enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing it with us all. |
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Re: Tomb
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:55:13 AM AEST
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| A very short but poignant work... in a way it paints an image of a tomb on a forsaken hill very readily. The concept is very apt and I like the sudden style. But the implied message is quite unnerving.....who do you hate soo much to consign, even in death, to such a dreary place? |
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