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Wingless Angel
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:14:59 PM in AEST
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You are the scars on my wrist
Those that cause me so much pain
Cuts and scars that won’t heal
Every inch of them drive me insane
My every flaw they do reveal
I’m a wingless angel standing wet under the rain
How could anyone love me for what I am?
Left to this world alone I feel dammed
Such a beast like me should not exist
I have no soul no life no love I just have this
This feeling of longing in my heart
When I’ve wanted to be with you from the start
You are the scars on my wrist
Those that cause me so much pain
Cuts and scars that won’t heal
Every inch of them drive me insane
My every flaw they do reveal
I’m an angel who cut off his own wings
Because he could not stand the pain
Of not being a living breathing thing
Every time I see you, it just hurts so much
When I know I cannot be with you
And never be something that you touch
Or care for or think about or say I love you to
All I have ever want is to feel that rush
When someone is in love and is loved in return
That’s the one thing that I will always yearn
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Re: Wingless Angel
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:35:15 PM AEST
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excellent write. you have some interesting rhyme schemes mixed up in this. the only reason i think i noticed was because in the first stanza ive tried that particular one, and only could pull it off once. ::shrugs::
very interesting a dark. you leave some things to be vague, which i like, but you actually tell a sort of story. |
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Re: Wingless Angel
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:27:17 AM AEST
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Alot of pain in your words, and you describe agony well, alot of emotions spill from this poem. Beautifully written in a dark way.
~Silence~ |
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Re: Wingless Angel
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:54:50 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well. I agree one can definently feel the feelings-n-emotions.
the luv u r searching for u will find in your own heart. Take it easy on yourself as nuthing life is in pardonable!
I'm sur e u have problems that trigger these feelings but cha gotta luv yourself. I know this from experience.
U should try to get help from a Dr. I'm sure there has to be a phycical reason that u aren't aware of that 'cause u to feel so depressed, angry and un luved.
U r a great writer and that's something positive about u that can bring to light the fact u r jus as good as anyone else on this planet.
God has no respector of person!
luv, huggs, faith, prayer, hope, inner healing, 4 giveness, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Wingless Angel
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:11:50 AM AEST
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very, very powerful write, I hve become a big fan of your writes :)
pixie xx |
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