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Red Lace
Contributed by
minnesotarose
on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh, Darling, you are so good
For me. In your arms
I am helplessly yours
As the mouth and tongue
Of your kisses feed the fires
Burning beneath the cauldron
Of my womanness. I long
To waken at dawn
Along side you, My Darling,
And see you rise
Like the morning sun
Coming white on the horizon.
Love, let your love
Stir inside me, hard-edged
And rigid as steel rod
In my hand, biting and solid
As iron against my mouth.
I want to see
Those thighs again, the sight
Of foaming white waters
Spiraling coyly around them,
My eyes and mind
Following their fluid stream
Down along every sinew
And hard curve of your body.
My love won't rest, My Love,
Until I have your heart
To hold in my hand, close to mine,
Warm and beating
Between my breasts,
Rousing you like a vision
Of red lace clinging
To my woman-wet skin.
Hold on to me fast,
My Darling, and with our love
Like a guiding oar
Held firm in my hand,
I'll sail you
Straight to the land
Of my secret caverns,
To dark and hidden places,
Where love-fountains spring wet,
And we alone
Will share the chalice
Of love-sweet milk and honey.
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2002-11-08 01:30:00]
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Re: Red Lace
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 01:36:32 AM AEST
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Very good. Beautifully written.
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Re: Red Lace
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:41:06 AM AEST
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| Well done, very discriptive! I really like this alot,very beautiful! Christina |
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Re: Red Lace
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:41:18 AM AEST
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| Well done, very discriptive! I really like this alot,very beautiful! Christina |
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Re: Red Lace
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:04:09 AM AEST
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Someone is going to need
to call 911 when and if he reads
this poem, because he is
going to pass out lol.
Very descriptive i agree
I enjoyed reading this alot
Keep em' coming
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Re: Red Lace
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by darkeyedman on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 11:54:27 PM AEST
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| u go rose! hot damn that poem should be published with pictures and an adult 17 rating. lol, good write. |
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