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Disillusioned
Contributed by
Bruce
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:32:36 AM in AEST
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I really though she loved me
but that is now in doubt
All the words of love and her actions
seems now to be a lie, throughout
This very beautiful lady
had captured me more, by the day
Everything about her
was special to me, in every way
To say that I am (Disillusioned)
and deep, into my heart
No words that I could write
could even begin to start
To tell you or her or anyone
the deep hurt that I feel
For me to have found out
her love was so unreal
Another hard lesson learned
they seem to come along
But life goes on , thank God
and I will remain strong
I wish her the best and happiness
everyday of her life
Loving her husband, as she does
and being his loving wife
Copyright ©
Bruce
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Re: Disillusioned
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:11:50 AM AEST
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I certenaly can relate from my past.
This write has much compassion, understanding and hurt.
I'm so sorry as I know how it feels to wake oneday and realize that your relationship was based n lies.
Sad write but a masterpeice with the extra pazzaz of good wishes.
Personlly it took much time for me not to want to kick his *** but being hurt so bad I did as u wish him best wishes 'cause he really needed good wishes.
luv, huggs, fith, hope, peace,
emy |
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Re: Disillusioned
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:17:15 AM AEST
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man i am going thru the same thing with my gf. although she's not married. it seems everyday i love her more and more, she captures me in a way that i love. but alas i am afraid she is seeing someone on the side!!!
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Re: Disillusioned
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:27:28 AM AEST
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woe ah what was that?
sorry to hear that.
good write. |
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Re: Disillusioned
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:10:30 AM AEST
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| life..it's really daily, huh? all I can say is we take the bitter with the sweet and hope the sweet takes the bitter taste away... why don't all of us who hurt get together..well mayber we already are. LOL. I died of heartbreak but I was too stubborn to fall over. |
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Re: Disillusioned
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:21:48 AM AEST
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Gads, I hate lessons in life!! They're always painful. (most of 'em anyways lol) Good write, Bruce. I hope you find someone and peace soon.
(((Bruce)))
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Disillusioned
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:05:06 AM AEST
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Awww here's a big hug *hugs* this is another moving write from you Bruce, it touched me
pixie xx |
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Re: Disillusioned
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:10:24 PM AEST
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Aww so much heartache and sorrow in your words. Can relate to this poem from in the past (long ago now) it hurts like hell but it does get better. Although you wont think so right now. Keep strong
A lovely yet sad write
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Disillusioned
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by mylastwords on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:49:57 PM AEST
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my last relationship was based on lies..he was cheating on me...im stil not ova it...he was my first love...maybe oneday ill find sum1 who'll care as much as you...
beautiful poem, Bruce!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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