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sorry is cheap
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:30:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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i hurt you, you say sorry is cheap, go away get off me, cant you look at me in the eyes, if you dont im not surprised, you love me i know,but when does it show, i need your love to live, i have so much love to give, please dont foresake me, you can hurt and brake me,like no one else, you hold my heart,your love feeds my soul, im sorry my emotions are out of controll, you can help it im begging you, cheer me up please im blue, i want to soothe your pain, your teardrops fell like rain, it will not happen again, i can not loose you ,my soulmate my friend, do you feel this way about me ? if you would just express your love it would set me free, i know that you love me please show it, please read what i write,im a poet, notice me when i put on a dress, keep me from killing who i am, tell me {our}life has a happy future ahead, please dont dread, spending time with me, when you are in a good mood so am i dont you see, you controll me so please console me, i know that you dont owe me, but please can you show me your love, you are my prayer sent from above, you have the power to make me happy or sad, i know(like you said our life not that bad), we are one now and thats how its going to be, i protect you ,you protect me, our love could be so sweet,cant we both try a little harder pete?
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Re: sorry is cheap
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alina on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:19:25 PM AEST (User
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This was very heartfelt!! Great Job. I've hurt some special people in my life and didn't realize it until it was too late. Everything in life will happen for a reason.......I hope things will get better for you and for your loved one. If it is true love.....then there is no need to worry because he will come back to you.
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Re: sorry is cheap
(User Rating: 1 ) by cryingonmyporch on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:48:04 PM AEST (User
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My x husband was like this. He beat me and left me for dead when i was five months pregnant with my kid. Now that he knows i had his son he wants to come back. Since this is the only son he has out of 7 kids. He got married and is trying to get a divorce. I love him I gave him a family. he just decided to throw it away. Get out of it, break the cycle before it's to late he will not change.
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Re: sorry is cheap
(User Rating: 1 ) by JenDannielle on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:38:15 AM AEST (User
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That was really good, I felt that same way when me & my b/f broke up the second time. I broke up w/ him b/c I was scared...& didnt' really know what I wanted..but yea..great poem! |
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Re: sorry is cheap
(User Rating: 1 ) by SocialMisfit on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:27:31 PM AEST (User
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nice. tis a very heart felt poem,and that is the best kind so keep em comeing.
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