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REALITY
Contributed by
Alina
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes your screams
Make me cry
So I go find a place to hide
I hide in that place
Until you pull me out
I wait for your abuse
Then I scream and shout !!
I hate my life
So I go and get high
I come back "home" to screaming parents
I wish I could die!
I go to the bathroom
I lock the door
I find a razor
The feeling to cut
Becomes more and more.
So I take the razor
I cut my wrists
I cut away my pain
I have raging fists.
I pass out for a while
Until I hear you banging on the door
My pain comes back to my heart
I'm in REALITY once more.
( Thank god I don't do this anymore.)
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-09-14 15:52:19]
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Re: REALITY
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:58:27 PM AEST
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| very powerful, especially the last stanza... good write* |
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Re: REALITY
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by parkman on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:22:35 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write ty for sharing |
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Re: REALITY
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:02:35 PM AEST
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I've gone through stuff similar...so sad...great poem though...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: REALITY
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:43:19 PM AEST
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And Thank God you are still with us !!
Thanks for sharing what must have been a difficult time in your life
Steve |
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Re: REALITY
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:30:24 PM AEST
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| I really like this. I could say this is sad and I hate people that would put their lifes in hell just because they can't faces their fear. |
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