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Another Wasted Youth
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:47:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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ABOUT POEM:
I grew up with this chick...she never really cared who she hung out with...now she's in highschool wanting to be "popular" Wanting and seeking attening! It's so stupid and sad how she's changed..thinking she's better than her old friends...we were there, we grew up with her, and now all she cares about is herself, popularity, and just basically fitting in! She's a Fake! She sits right next to me and doesn't even say anything to me! OMG and my old best friend sits right in front of me in a another class and is so concieted up the ass! Not a word from her either! What Losers!
One so stuck in a world of themselves
Losing touch with who they once were
Becoming who they thought they should be
Lying to themselves
To become a fake
A lost soul
Wanting attention
Wanting to be like everyone else
So sad to see
Another one go
Another one following
Another one gone...
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:51:06 PM AEST
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Yeah, sounds like HS, thank GOd those days are over....no wait, they are not. The military is just like HS!
I can never escape. |
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:52:08 PM AEST
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SO TRUE!!! so many people waste their last years of high school caring about what other people think of them and so many opportunities pass them by..i couldn't have said it better..good write...
blessed be
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:19:20 PM AEST
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As long as you are true to yourself is all that matters. Besides....it is obviously not a friendship lost if they are to fake to even love themselves. Just keep your head up.....you'll make better friends through out life.
ALINA |
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by Heartfilledblood on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:30:00 PM AEST
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This is not a crappy poem at all. Displays the messege well. Good write my friend.
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:56:45 PM AEST
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Oooh, I like this . . . so true, too. It's one of the saddest things you can find in school. I think we've all witnessed it before, and you describe it perfectly. The last three lines are just so poignant . . .
Well, great job, very well done.
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by Elysianfields on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:07:23 PM AEST
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| Great poem! Perfectly describes why many people wind up as just cattle shuffling through a gate! |
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by silverjade on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 01:29:16 PM AEST
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| very true but like they've said its high school and we all go through problems with who we are, one day theyll notice what they did and learn. good poem. |
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by monophobic on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:44:00 PM AEST
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| hey-i use to lie to myself but i didn't get anywhere-then i grew up-now i live how i wanna live and ur old friends need to grow up! good write!! |
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:08:23 PM AEST
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Another one that goes through life without an ounce of loyalty to friendship. It's not about how many people like you, it's about who they are, and why they do.
Take care, Summer.
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Re: Another Wasted Youth
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:42:09 PM AEST
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This honestly and truly touched my heart. I was that girl at one point so glad I knew to stop. I love your work so far.
theresa |
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