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Forgotten angels
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The time you take to walk alone,
brings the tears only angels can cry.
Your innocence of the lost past
dies as your fake smile crosses your face.
Memories float like wrinkled leaves,
struggling so hard to breath the air.
Angels above catching their lonely tears,
trying so hard to give you a hope,
yet the stone cold heart
you call your best friend
built up walls no love could break.
Like a ripple in the sea
you soon disapear without the world knowing.
These forgotten angels bleed for you,
they never give up when you fall to pieces
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2004-09-14 20:54:20]
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Re: Forgotten angels
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:59:23 AM AEST
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I liked this poem Gery. It saddened me and I liked the collation to angels.
An emotionally packed and moving write.
Kie |
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Re: Forgotten angels
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by AnastasiaN on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:04:09 AM AEST
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| i'm sorry for your cousin and i hope this person doesn't burden her or your family anymore....it's hurtful when what seems like great people change for the worst...you almost wish you were God and could turn everything around...good luck and great poem |
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