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On Whom The Sun Doth Shine
Contributed by
Opium
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Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
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Vast meadows of gold, thine hair
A beauty so availeth yet so rare
Shy sunlight touching yer tender soft skin
And danceth unaptly penetrating thy soul within
You look so alive in this pelf light
Dight with life, albeit yer guise of fright
At the dawn I rose, just to behold thy grace
And I stood before yer beauty that veiled so tenderly all heaven in thine face
On blood sheets lies your naked ivory body so calm
Once, I avowed your magnificence ne'er to harm
In the stillness of the night you gently slept away
I stood garth watching you slumber, awaiting the day
As the black sky turn into blue, and again the earth felt the sunrise
Your eyes still shut so beautifully to ne'er see my cries
And I cursed your picturesque splendor for such pain I feel inside
Maugre my false valor I still endure my deprived pride
From tears my eyes hath drowneth for such cruelty by the hands of mine
Now your benevolence hath forsooth me, I wonder on whom yer sun doth shine.
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Re: On Whom The Sun Doth Shine
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:24:49 AM AEST
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| This is vey beautiful! Christina |
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:52:21 AM AEST
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Wow this is so deep
Very beautiful image you
put in my mind about this
I enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: On Whom The Sun Doth Shine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 12:37:46 PM AEST
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Wonderful piece of poetry. Great write! Larry
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 12:50:23 PM AEST
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| This is incredible ... It made me weep. Such a beautiful poem. |
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Re: On Whom The Sun Doth Shine
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by Elisabeth on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:23:47 PM AEST
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This was an excellent write! You certainly have a way with words. I can't wait to read more.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 10:21:09 PM AEST
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| :S |
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Re: On Whom The Sun Doth Shine
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by gina on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 10:31:42 PM AEST
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| :S |
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Re: On Whom The Sun Doth Shine
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 01:25:39 AM AEST
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I know I have already commented, but I have read this poem so many times - it is awesome in its beauty. You are such a wonderful poet. Thank you so much for posting it - I have read it to so many of my friends - perhaps not everyone draws from it what I do, but I really feel its message.
Beautiful work.
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