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Finally
Contributed by
Swe3testLittl3S1n
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:18:09 PM in AEST
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As I put this gun to my head
Visions of you run thru my mind
The times we spent together
Laughing over the dumbest things
And, the times we spent crying
I could come to you for anything.
You turned on me, and made my life living hell
The door to your heart,
Was slammed in my face
We are nothing more.
As I shake, and pull the trigger
A smile comes to my face
I've finally let you go..
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2004-09-15 15:18:09]
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Re: Finally
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by sammydid on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:22:42 PM AEST
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very real and filled with anger. i liked the 'door to your heart' phrase. keep writing- kicks a*s
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Re: Finally
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:55:46 PM AEST
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like wow!
speechless...
i kinda know how you feel. but anyway. its an awesome poem. very real. i loved it. keep writing!
peace n love
jenny |
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Re: Finally
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:04:25 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write. i too am speechless. |
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