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When I was Gone
Contributed by
sammydid
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Not just one stain on my shirt-
One huge one, covering everything
Big. Black. Burnt.
I look around and only see stains.
You want make me to cry?
Make my knees go weak?
I''d just love to see you try.
I look at my hands and see them shaking.
What happened to you
When I was gone?
This is what you can really do?
I look forward to your leave.
I see that you were busy
Up- rooting the yard
The smell of filth makes me dizzy
I look up and hope that you go away
What happened to you
When I was gone?
This is what you can really do?
I look forward to your leave.
You destroyed my home.
But it was such a short trip.
I leave and now you're alone
I look back only once, and still see stains.
I look ahead and only see the road.
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Re: When I was Gone
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:54:06 PM AEST
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| not too confusing. your style with being a bit vague in places reminds me of how i write usually. nice rhyme scheme. i liked the ending too. great write. |
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