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Lackluster Eyes
Contributed by
SuicideParty
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:28:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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If God is here to help us, where exactly is he now?
Disenchantment idly lingers near the want of knowing how.
But I know that even if I comprehend the words you speak
Unrequited points of interest will be all of its physique.
And as deliverance from decadence is wasted on the false,
Negation of the heart is mere denial of the cost.
In this war against the mirror, if you lose youve lost it all;
But to win defeats the purpose, as the purpose is to fall.
Never knowing, just assuaging with a vain hope for release
While in keeping silent secrets of the ones that taunt the beast.
If your need is all consuming, than your want will surely kill.
Content in solitude and suffering unaware youve lost your will.
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2004-09-15 18:28:22]
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Re: Lackluster Eyes
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:09:32 PM AEST
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Very good!...you said, "I wish I was half as good as half of the people on here." You are! You are very talented! Believe me you are...this is great!
Check out my poem Suicide God...has to do with God watching...a few of mine do infact...or me watching...
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Re: Lackluster Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:38:15 PM AEST
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amazing write.
"In this war against the mirror, if you lose you’ve lost it all;
But to win defeats the purpose, as the purpose is to fall."
and
"If your need is all consuming, than your want will surely kill.
Content in solitude and suffering unaware you’ve lost your will."
were my favorite parts of this. excellent work, keep it up.
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