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Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:28:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Darkness over shadows
The morning glow
So cold and alone
Under the stars
A frozen tear
Stuck to the face
Someone is watching
Not a worrying soul
Observing the sadness
Off in the distance
So old and fragile
Without a care
Under a tree
He watches me..
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2004-09-15 19:28:38]
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Re: Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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| this was excellent, deliciously dark and moody. short and expressive, you are very very good. i am glad you told me to check you out. i feel that we write the same way!!! anyway excellent stuff here. |
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Re: Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
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by SuicideParty on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:49:21 PM AEST
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Oh, my. That was...that was great! I mean, yeah. Really, really great. Very beautiful wording, great verse and you have marvelous talent. *sigh* I wish I was half as good as half of the people on here.
~Sam |
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Re: Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
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by Solnubis on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:24:48 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. |
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Re: Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:25:19 PM AEST
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| very nice. excellent write. |
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Re: Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:30:45 PM AEST
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| good one i like it. i think he be watchin me too dat old fool |
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Re: Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:14:55 PM AEST
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| This is very good, Thank you for sharing!! |
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Re: Off In The Distance...He Watches Me...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:43:10 PM AEST
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| HAHA! I like this, dark and moody. very well done, I am pleased. |
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