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I Tried
Contributed by
longforgottenlove
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:49:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I tried to forgive you,
and once again it didn't work,
you knew I loved you,
but you didn't care if I hurt.
I tried to explain what you've done,
I wrote a nice long letter,
no reply came back to me,
though without you- I'm doing better.
I tried to be there for you,
even when you weren't in need,
I gave you my heart and soul,
but then you made them bleed.
I tried to tolerate the conflicts,
and your decisions that affected me,
but you only thought of yourself,
'cuz you really didn't see.
I tried to be your friend,
but I was taken advantage of,
just threw me to the side,
you didn't want my love.
I tried to be your lover,
then you got confused,
twisting our friendship around,
and leaving me alone and used.
I tried to support you,
through the secrets and the tears,
when no one thought you could make it,
I was showing you no fear.
I tried and what else can I say,
it's over, we're finished, the past,
but if it wasn't meant to be,
then why does this pain last?
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longforgottenlove
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2004-09-15 19:49:22]
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Re: I Tried
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:03:18 PM AEST
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Great poem. I know exactly how you are
feeling. You captured the emotion perfectly.
I'm sorry you had to go through this. Chin up.
~Breezy |
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Re: I Tried
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by fastpitchqt on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:47:02 PM AEST
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| OMG!! You like totally captured my feelings in this poem. I cant even explain how dead on your poem was. It was as if you wrote down what was in my head.AWESOME poem...keep it up!! |
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