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Numbness
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:28:42 PM in AEST
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Numbness
The guilt that resides
Is killing me inside
The anger that rises
Is all of my demise
I wish I never let it control
What I feel inside
Too far I have let this go
To kill me every time
My passion rules reason
Because of this I'm lost
To only feel this
I let the worst part of me
Consumes me till I bleed
It took over me freely
I'm lost to the numbness
All of this loneliness
The anger that infuses
The hate that walls me in
To only commit sins
Because of me I'm like this
I hate life because of what I did
The guilt kills me inside
As I live through the mistakes
That I can never hide
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Essentially9
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2004-09-15 21:28:42]
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Re: Numbness
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:41:15 PM AEST
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With nothing more to say:Powerful write..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Numbness
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by teagy03 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:47:57 PM AEST
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Numbness...I'm sure that we all feel that at one time or another. I connect wit the words of this poem like you wouldn't imagine. Great write, and nice form.
Cheers
Teagy |
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Re: Numbness
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:51:38 PM AEST
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Good stimulating write.
Truth is you're right
But only from a certain light
You can't break free
You can only be alright
Good poem, |
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Re: Numbness
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:45:08 PM AEST
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Great write....touching....
Hope all is well.
Jenni |
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Re: Numbness
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:32:07 PM AEST
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| the cadence is perfect......you touched my soul with this one.....mirrors a lot right now for me......strong... impressive .....you write so well...... |
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Re: Numbness
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by secretwind on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:48:28 PM AEST
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Another flow that has taken a hold of me,I feel almost all your wrtes even thoguh I don't comment all the time.
Keep the Innervisions flowing.
The Wind...... |
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Re: Numbness
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by Coaster on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:08:15 PM AEST
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Wow, very powerful poem. Keep writing and I look foward to reading more from you.
Ryan |
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Re: Numbness
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:51:15 PM AEST
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This is just so profound, I do not know exactly how to express the emotions this piques. WOW
peace
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